My first submission... The title may seem a little pompous but I actually imagine her as a clumsy and hesitant person, much different from what her "title" would suggest.
The right wing is not good... Perhaps it will be better once I put some colors. :/
Sketched with a red pencil on my crappy notebook and inked with 0.5 criterium on letter paper in about about 3 hours for the whole thing, with a lot of slacking and doing something else... ._. (Some colors added in photoshop to brighten it up)
Thank you for this kind comment!
I still have a lot to learn with pencils (Like how to get thin lines without breaking my mine to make it thinner! ), and I need to structure better my drawings and folds (I practice with my curtains... ).
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I couldn't get any darker... Except if I trade my caramel icing for some chocolate...
I like this piece, though your first it shows alot of dedication in line quality and composition. The character is nicely dressed, I love the costume you've given her. I would have to say its almost like a cheerleader/bandperson costume because of the buttons on the side. Her anatomy though anime, is nicely done, good proportions and weight. Nice hair, the eyes are symmetrical and the wings are marvelously done. It shows that you spend time and the effort to make each feahter detailed but not too overly done to distract the viewer. Fun details like the lock, the frills on the panty and the decor of the dress itself. A good strong piece. No real critique except what has been stated by others. I really like this piece so good job.
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"...the dreams that have faded....never forget them"-Yuna
//>_<\\ <<< me on college.
WHOOOO HOOOO!
It's like having my own militia of plastic men!
:iconladie
thank you very much. My biggest weakness is the fabrics, I still have trouble creating decent folds, and when I do them hapzardly they end up being weird, to say the least.
Now I'll have to color this and add a decent background... .____. I feel tired already.
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I couldn't get any darker... Except if I trade my caramel icing for some chocolate...
thank you very much! Yes I add this littel thing in many of my drawings, I don't know why, actually. Before I had a square-shaped bunny... Who knows what may come next!
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I couldn't get any darker... Except if I trade my caramel icing for some chocolate...
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I couldn't get any darker... Except if I trade my caramel icing for some chocolate...
I still have a lot to learn with pencils (Like how to get thin lines without breaking my mine to make it thinner!
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This seems pretty professional to me.
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I like this piece, though your first it shows alot of dedication in line quality and composition. The character is nicely dressed, I love the costume you've given her. I would have to say its almost like a cheerleader/bandperson costume because of the buttons on the side. Her anatomy though anime, is nicely done, good proportions and weight. Nice hair, the eyes are symmetrical and the wings are marvelously done. It shows that you spend time and the effort to make each feahter detailed but not too overly done to distract the viewer. Fun details like the lock, the frills on the panty and the decor of the dress itself. A good strong piece. No real critique except what has been stated by others. I really like this piece so good job.
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"...the dreams that have faded....never forget them"-Yuna
//>_<\\ <<< me on college.
WHOOOO HOOOO!
It's like having my own militia of plastic men!
:iconladie
Now I'll have to color this and add a decent background... .____. I feel tired already.
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I couldn't get any darker... Except if I trade my caramel icing for some chocolate...
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I couldn't get any darker... Except if I trade my caramel icing for some chocolate...
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